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The Ocean's Tide
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Monday, 16th April 2018 @ 02:45:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Have you ever been so, so, sad
Deep, deep, down inside
To the point that you know not who
In your soul still resides
Has your life been and cycle of push and pull
Just like the ocean/'/s tide
A body left twisting in the wind
Caught in circumstances you can/'/t seem to mend
A depressing journey that has no apparent end
No friends
No one to help you to defend
Your eyes awaken to darkness
What awaits you are only the visions you care not to see
That is what it/'/s like to be me
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jamesstockdale
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2018-04-16 14:45:11]
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Re: The Ocean's Tide
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 17th April 2018 @ 03:52:56 AM AEST
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I can feel the emotional torture in your words
I know that place too
where you are trapped on your island paradise
by Ill trade winds... |
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Re: The Ocean's Tide
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by Durango on
Tuesday, 17th April 2018 @ 04:47:12 AM AEST
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You squeeze out all the emotions of this poem
Over the readers head.
Deep and oozing with a lonely helplessness.
Powerful. |
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Re: The Ocean's Tide
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 17th April 2018 @ 04:52:27 AM AEST
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Powerful and compelling James. So vivid and descriptive that I started worrying about you!
Makes me wonder how many others experience life in a similar way.
We tend to avoid sad people, but in truth, they are the ones that need us most.
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Re: The Ocean's Tide
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th May 2018 @ 08:24:32 AM AEST
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I think we all have these feelings some times or other in life u just have the guts to put on paper so well.
Great writing
huggs,
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Re: The Ocean's Tide
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th August 2020 @ 05:03:02 AM AEST
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// Curses, I had not seen this one either!!!! And I wish I had. This is so me it`s you me you me me you you ... we`re connected, somehow.
That`s what it`s like to be me too. Maybe not all the time but I do have these moments.
// Thank you//.
Dugan
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