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Have it YOUR way
Contributed by
softerware
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Wednesday, 18th April 2018 @ 02:56:03 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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The contest was on, in the first room he found;
Two long earred rabbits hopping around.
He chased and he scurried but caught none at all;
Both got away through a hole in the wall.
The next room had ten rabbits all in a row;
He tried running faster to catch one although;
He counted seven and then only four;
They all disappeared thru a hole in the floor.
He pushed at that hole and he strugged and squeezed;
Trying to get to them, down on his knees.
Alas, he got stuck and had to be saved;
And won no awards at the fair on that day.
The winner he heard hadnt chased them at all;
But merely sat down with his back to the wall.
And grabbed every rabbit as they hopped about;
Blocking the hole so they couldnt get out.
Follow the recipe of a mistake;
And were bound to end up with the same kind of cake.
Do it your own way;
You know what they say;
At least if we lose;
It wont be the same way!
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softerware
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Re: Have it YOUR way
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 18th April 2018 @ 03:39:23 AM AEST
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Wonderful and true! Great poem.
Of course the first person up to a challenge is at a disadvantage of course. Story telling with a great flow. |
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Re: Have it YOUR way
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by Durango on
Wednesday, 18th April 2018 @ 04:59:27 AM AEST
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reads like a nursery rhyme complete with a moral. Well thought out. I will read this to my 9 & 6 year old boys.
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Re: Have it YOUR way
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 18th April 2018 @ 05:26:28 PM AEST
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More knowledge passed on from the master,
if I could only stop eating cake
he he |
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Re: Have it YOUR way
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by ming on
Wednesday, 18th April 2018 @ 07:09:00 PM AEST
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| This is a thinking wo/man/'/s poem and lovely as well. At least to me, as my way is hardly ever as theirs.. |
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Re: Have it YOUR way
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by emystar on
Friday, 20th April 2018 @ 04:45:59 AM AEST
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very creative writing.
Blessings.
emy |
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