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Zombie
Contributed by
PhoenixPM
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You never looked behind To see what you had left Never felt sorry For the unborn tears never wept They stayed inside You forbid them to fall Only the weak cry But your way isn't the only one Fearing to be hurt again Pushed away everyone As if caring were a sin You're cold inside Some say dead But they don't know you like I do Watched you lie awake in bed The only sound a heartbeat Not my own, not your's Your eyes, my eyes meet You blink, I'm gone You pretend it doesn't bother you But you can't deny it does I watch from the shadow of our love All that is left now
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PhoenixPM
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2003-06-03 23:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Zombie
(User Rating: 1 ) by TFLM on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 11:43:48 PM AEST (User
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I used to hate things left unsaid. Forever worse than saying the 'wrong' thing which can only partially be false. This reminded me of mistakes in the past... |
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Re: Zombie
(User Rating: 1 ) by Apartment213 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:50:06 AM AEST (User
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AWESOME
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Re: Zombie
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 06:44:39 PM AEST (User
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Out of all of your poems on this site, this is my favourite.
It's dark, it's sad...it's beautiful
R
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Re: Zombie
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 01:11:20 AM AEST (User
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I feel for this poem... |
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