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Clouds of May
Contributed by
Durango
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Monday, 7th May 2018 @ 04:26:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I stand on snowcapped mountains lofty perch,
Where it seems, the earth below is rendered lost
Within a sea of air inflated clouds,
So thick that I could sail across.
I gaze upon the unmade bed of clouds,
Where sunlight skips atop the day
And know the frosty waves across the roof of earth
Will melt and pour the rains of May.
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Durango
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2018-05-07 04:26:14]
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Re: Clouds of May
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by softerware on
Tuesday, 8th May 2018 @ 04:28:15 AM AEST
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Poetry doesn/'/t get any more classic that this.
I love the image of an UNMADE BED OF CLOUDS, and the picture you have painted from your lofty perch, was done so in the most difficult style: lean on words, and rich in content.
Bravo.
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Re: Clouds of May
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by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 12th May 2018 @ 01:31:33 PM AEST
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Lovely indeed.
This just had it all! |
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Re: Clouds of May
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by speedy on
Saturday, 12th May 2018 @ 10:02:52 PM AEST
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| That/'/s so beautiful! Great write. |
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Re: Clouds of May
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by Invierno on
Monday, 14th May 2018 @ 09:35:23 PM AEST
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Wonderful Very reminiscent of Shelley. Lovely, just lovely. I wish you would keep going. You could have a real classic to your credit.
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