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The Sum Of It
Contributed by
welleyedo
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Wednesday, 16th May 2018 @ 01:31:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pour from me these draining memories
As I fight this war of one
A face to fight the dark days
Or I wage on unarmed
Wined down till all thats left is black
I refuse to surrender
Tear from me these scars
That chained me to the pain
And binde me to the sins I/'/ve seen
Burry me with the dreams life has taken
Leaving you with my promise
I will find rebirth in the grave you dig
Lift my eyes and carry further
A soul stained in blood
I will not cower, I will not run
Copyright ©
welleyedo
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2018-05-16 01:31:04]
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Re: The Sum Of It
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by softerware on
Wednesday, 16th May 2018 @ 03:51:17 PM AEST
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Like a butterfly struggling to emerge from its useless cocoon, your poem describes the personal history from which you would emerge, and your fervent wish to do so.
My favorite line is BURY ME WITH THE DREAMS LIFE HAS TAKEN.
In your passionate plea we are mindful that for humans, there is no reboot.
softerware
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Re: The Sum Of It
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by Durango on
Wednesday, 16th May 2018 @ 04:05:54 PM AEST
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Emerging with courage an inner struggle this poem fights
with a steady left jab and a walloping right hook. |
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