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Message From The Other Side
Contributed by
waynster
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Thursday, 17th May 2018 @ 02:47:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hold your hand but this sensation you do not know I touch you on the shoulder because I still love you so
I live this life beyond from your world I have gone away You see right through me I see your tears every single day
I walk by your side trying to give you a sign that I am here I want you to be happy I wish I could wipe away each and every single tear
We had a love like no other best friends on a common ground I know you think about me through every sight and sound
Please dont be so sad dont mourn my going away Try to find happiness again as you know I wouldnt want it any other way
Our love was for a time we made the most of it all Then came that day when the heavens made my call
Our love will always be death cannot take that away I will be waiting for you here and watch over you every single day
Written: 16 May 2018 Copyright 2018 E. Wayne Searles. All Rights Reserved
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Re: Message From The Other Side
(User Rating: 1 ) by speedy on
Friday, 18th May 2018 @ 01:50:56 AM AEST (User
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My sister and I lost our Dad 8 and a half months ago at the age of 62. Reading this was a great comfort; like he/'/s telling us he/'/s ok.
It was beautiful. Great write. |
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Re: Message From The Other Side
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 19th May 2018 @ 07:10:04 AM AEST (User
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wow this is a fantastic write.
I see you got it going on even mo better since Ive been away.
No one could read this and not be comforted
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Re: Message From The Other Side
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 19th May 2018 @ 05:13:28 PM AEST (User
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well done
great out look on life after death |
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Re: Message From The Other Side
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 20th May 2018 @ 02:29:54 AM AEST (User
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If our loved ones could speak, this is what it would sound like. When we cry for lost loved ones, we are crying for ourselves, and while it is necessary to mourn, it is a comfort to feel that we are still somehow connected.
Very reassuring, with a gentle cadence and by a sincere hand long dedicated to comforting others. A treasure.
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Re: Message From The Other Side
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th June 2018 @ 10:29:37 AM AEST (User
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It/'/s a very heartwarming piece.
I/'/ve always thought that if I pass before my wife it would be nice to still watch over her even though she would not know I was there.
Made me smile a contented smile
Steve |
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