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Shelter for the heart
Contributed by
softerware
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Sunday, 20th May 2018 @ 08:43:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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When things go wrong; We have to be strong.
Hiding our feelings inside.
To dwell for a while in fervent denial;
Taking it all in our stride.
A kind word from a friend; brings our pretense to end;
We collapse, we break down, and we cry.
Were loathe to reveal the mask we conceal;
Friendship is patient to mend.
Healing requires extinguishing fires;
Beginnings must first know their end.
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softerware
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2018-05-20 20:43:42]
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Re: Shelter for the heart
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by JamesStockdale on
Monday, 21st May 2018 @ 12:21:15 AM AEST
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Great write Jaye.
I/'/m going to twist and turn on your last line.
It locked me up for the time being. |
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Re: Shelter for the heart
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2018 @ 01:54:11 AM AEST
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| Truer words were never spoken. I loved it. Great write! |
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Re: Shelter for the heart
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2018 @ 01:54:13 AM AEST
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| Truer words were never spoken. I loved it. Great write! |
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Re: Shelter for the heart
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 29th June 2018 @ 10:51:41 AM AEST
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True friendship is a wonderful gift.
Sadly this world is full of fair weather friends so I you have friends who truly value you, make sure you hold onto them
Comforting write
Steve |
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