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Grace In Me Now
Contributed by
invierno
on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2018 @ 07:57:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Clouds by the ton hung breathless above,
strings from heaven holding them fast,
covering memories false and true,
allowing peace to float upon me at last.
Through a childs eyes when I didnt consider
a gallon of water weighs eight pounds;
I just liked the glitter of flashing lightening,
the soon thereafter thundering sounds.
Now to go back to that wonder less wonder,
retrace the steps of a heart run adrift,
feel the caress of heavens blessings,
the touch of rain, the wet of Gods kiss.
So much behind me, memories asunder,
footsteps taken in puddles afoul,
but by letting go that I am alone
the door has opened for grace in me now.
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invierno
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2018-05-22 19:57:03]
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Re: Grace In Me Now
(User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on
Tuesday, 22nd May 2018 @ 08:10:46 PM AEST
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Lovely. THE WET OF GODS KISS is a beautiful line!
This is a wish to be able to return at will to life through the eyes of the child. Actors make a living because they can do this.
for the rest of us, poetry such as yours helps us to connect through the memories and images your writing shows.
Birds of a feather today are we.
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Re: Grace In Me Now
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 24th May 2018 @ 01:34:05 AM AEST
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Wonderfully insightful and inspirational.
Also raw and uncomplicated.
Great write! |
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