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Land Of Enchantment
Contributed by
invierno
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Wednesday, 23rd May 2018 @ 04:20:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I rolled into Ruidoso
with an avocado and a buck,
half drunk and baked to brown
in that gold Nuevo Mexicali sun.
I lost my girl in Red Rock,
two days or lives ago,
now she/'/s somewhere in Arizona,
thats all she let me know.
Oh, now I know Ill never make it back.
Ive ran to far or never left the track,
I remember clearly hazy memories,
how I slipped, let life fell me at the knees,
let it kick my ass to sapling
from a once mighty tree.
Old Mesillas dusty taverns,
south of Truth or Consequence
turned the night into a laser show,
from the acid my last dollar spent.
And I cried Anna! to the stars,
they laughed until I sighed,
then in the desert west of Cruces
I folded into earth and died.
Copyright ©
invierno
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2018-05-23 04:20:58]
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Re: Land Of Enchantment
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 24th May 2018 @ 01:36:35 AM AEST
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Crazy good at its core.
Out of the box for you. |
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Re: Land Of Enchantment
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by softerware on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 04:59:03 AM AEST
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Bravo for your venture into a new style and theme!
This testifies to your versatile capability. Talent must be tested for us to feel our worth. You have succeeded admirably in surmounting your self-imposed limits. Rise to the sky, poet! Bring us more of the you we do not yet know.
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