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Too Wise to Fly
Contributed by
softerware
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Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 06:18:31 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Let us depart, wild of heart;
Into the moments thunder.
My grown up and my child at war;
Tearing me asunder.
Age has made me far too wise;
Ive learned as time went by;
I fear Ill meet my own demise;
Too smart to try am I!
Once I was a dreamer;
Who leapt and sang and danced
Today Im just a schemer;
There is no second chance.
They warn you and protect you;
From things they never tried;
Time stacks the deck against you;
When you should own the sky.
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softerware
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2018-05-28 06:18:31]
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Re: Too Wise to Fly
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by speedy on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 01:32:21 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: Too Wise to Fly
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by Invierno on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 10:04:33 PM AEST
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I love this. We write of the same thoughts, you and I. That/'/s part of the magic of poetry; that the same idea or concept can be delivered in so many different ways, yet convey the exact same intent of delivery? This is so cool!
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Re: Too Wise to Fly
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 29th May 2018 @ 09:53:08 PM AEST
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I/'/m feeling the second to last stanza.
Damn sad but ain/'/t it the truth. I/'/m not there yet but the day is near. What a sobering write. |
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