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A Note To Death
Contributed by
invierno
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Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 10:01:52 PM in AEST
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Death, you flitting mockingbird.
When does beauty pause but for your stilling.
Tip tap your beak on the window I notice now,
though in limbs and winds Ive always known youre there.
Having pierced the veil, seen behind your wings,
there is no fear to torment me;
Death, you are nothing.
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invierno
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2018-05-28 22:01:52]
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Re: A Note To Death
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by softerware on
Monday, 28th May 2018 @ 10:49:44 PM AEST
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Do you comprehend the raw accuracy of the last line?
It brings closure to your poem like slamming a door!
The title is unusual until I realize you are greeting Death,, who is indeed always there.
There are two amazing messages here:
Fear not death, and
Live as if you were dying, because you are.
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Re: A Note To Death
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by speedy on
Tuesday, 29th May 2018 @ 12:07:24 PM AEST
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Great write.
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Re: A Note To Death
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 31st May 2018 @ 04:37:00 PM AEST
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Very true. What comes after death is concerning to me.
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Re: A Note To Death
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by RussellReinhardt on
Thursday, 31st May 2018 @ 10:31:20 PM AEST
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Dearest Mike
How nice to read you again. Man what an awesome write. It ties in so well with my write The Grim Reaper. I agree hole heartedly with Soft. We have no reason to fear death for he is our friend that will take us home one day. Again awesome write.
God Bless
Greetings
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