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Ladders To The Sky
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Friday, 1st June 2018 @ 01:22:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Rainbows
Our ladders to the sky
Colorful memorials for those
Who have died
Shooting stars
Farther than the planet of mars
Bring forth new life
As they rain on down
Clouds in the sky
Provide such a pillowy ride
Heaven and earth
Is all we know
Until it*s time for us to glow
Wouldn*t you know
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2018-06-01 13:22:11]
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Re: Ladders To The Sky
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by speedy on
Saturday, 2nd June 2018 @ 12:05:30 AM AEST
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I lost my father nine months ago from a heart condition at the age of 62 and reading this made me smile, thinking of my dad climbing rainbows. The symbolism was beautiful!
Great write.
Hannah B
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Re: Ladders To The Sky
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by Crow on
Saturday, 2nd June 2018 @ 03:32:25 AM AEST
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hi james,
just stopped in to comment here. I like this write, it light and bright to me. hope you don`t mind me commenting. Crow |
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Re: Ladders To The Sky
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by softerware on
Saturday, 2nd June 2018 @ 10:47:51 PM AEST
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A happy poem envisioning our fantasies of life in the clouds. I like the asterisk for your contractions!
Very clever of you.
My favorite line is HEAVEN AND EARTH IS ALL WE KNOW. You*ve summarized your story and it is a fitting conclusion!
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Re: Ladders To The Sky
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Friday, 28th August 2020 @ 05:57:04 AM AEST
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// I don`t know if I`m reading into this because of my own beliefs (maybe suspicions) but this sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo reminds of the possibility of reincarnation.
So, yeah, there`s that and the wow thing for me.
Thank you, Sir TimmyJimmy
Dugan
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Re: Ladders To The Sky
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th August 2020 @ 05:59:03 AM AEST
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//P.S. As of this very moment, you have eleven pages of poetry. This is the end of page four. I`m stopping //for now//.
Buh bye.
Dugan
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