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Soliloquy To An Elm
Contributed by
invierno
on
Wednesday, 13th June 2018 @ 08:08:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I see you clear as day.
Sky punched eyes
beneath your shaded forest brow,
your leafy jaws that sway in light
distinct from the darkened slash of mouth.
Your nose even juts in bulbous array;
Irish, by the look of you,
but the wind on pause or push
can change it any given day.
I, like you, am shade and light.
Do you see me?
Across the street?
Pondering as we do any given afternoon
when leaf, light and wind in concert meet?
Copyright ©
invierno
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2018-06-13 20:08:41]
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Re: Soliloquy To An Elm
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 14th June 2018 @ 12:53:28 AM AEST
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It was worth the wait Mike.
Well done and a finely crafted piece.
I liked the word choices and the simplicity of it.
Actually it was brilliant and the lead in was as well. |
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Re: Soliloquy To An Elm
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by softerware on
Friday, 15th June 2018 @ 04:47:08 AM AEST
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A rare and sensitive piece that makes love to the trees and the beauty of nature. If only we could speak to the trees and they could speak back. Imagine the conversations!!
This write is inspiring and generous of heart.
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