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Show Me A Man
Contributed by
invierno
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Thursday, 14th June 2018 @ 04:16:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Show me a man
proclaiming his plan
perfection in every way,
and Ill show you a fool
whos forgotten the rule
perfection is sought,
not attained.
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invierno
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2018-06-14 16:16:46]
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Re: Show Me A Man
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by softerware on
Friday, 15th June 2018 @ 04:39:41 AM AEST
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Well said! Biting and to the point!
Perfection, like fame is rare and fleeting! Your fame is in your writing!
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Re: Show Me A Man
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by redwest802 on
Sunday, 17th June 2018 @ 03:15:55 AM AEST
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| A very well written piece. Personally, I may have left the /'/every day/'/ off the last line. I just think it flows better without it. That/'/s just me though, well done. |
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