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Glass Teardrop
Contributed by
Lia
on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She walked with clumsy rythm
Her lips were full of melody
She spun around and hit the ground
Her knee fell in harms way
Her tears were streaming steady
She called out to me for help
I knelt beside her aching knee
And planted a kiss upon the pain
She took my hand inside of hers
We stared up at the clouds
And then she started spouting
Off words I don't quite understand
I have loved you for my whole life
And I'll love you for the rest
And if some day my eyes do close
I'll love you in my death
I give you something mommie
That I hold dearest to my heart
It leads the way into my soul
And to my deepest depths
So take this present mommie
As I give it to your freely
Please hold on tight don't let go
Of my teardrop made of glass
She let go of my hand
And stood her tiny body up
With a gift of a moochie
She ran back to playing
Spinning and singing
The rest of the day away
I opened up my shaking hand
To find the gift she'd left
And there between the life lines
Sat a clear marble made of glass...
Copyright ©
Lia
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2003-06-04 16:05:00]
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Re: Glass Teardrop
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:30:27 PM AEST
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very touching write. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Glass Teardrop
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 04:31:51 PM AEST
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Ohh Lia..this is so beautiful...and so touching...
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Re: Glass Teardrop
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 06:23:58 PM AEST
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| shelby and jenni took the words right out of my mouth... |
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Re: Glass Teardrop
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 08:50:55 PM AEST
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Hi Lia,
A very moving poem. Touched my heart for sure.
Regards,
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Re: Glass Teardrop
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by cryingonmyporch on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:39:12 PM AEST
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That was beautiful. it even made me cry.
Always
Amy |
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