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† Bloodthirst †
Contributed by
deadly_blaZe
on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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walking through darkness
running from light
lurking behind the shadows
searching for life.
There up ahead
2 children play
swinging back and forth
soon to be prey.
Lingering closer
smelling their flesh
watching their faces
as they gaze into death.
I lure them forward
tilting back their heads
sinking my teeth
into 8 year old flesh.
At first they struggle
then they subside
theyre limbs falling
limp at their sides.
Once they are drained
and can give no more
i dissapear into darkness
searching for more
Copyright ©
deadly_blaZe
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2003-06-04 17:05:00]
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Re: † Bloodthirst †
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 09:16:07 PM AEST
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Loved the feeling you created in this poem although I didn't like the topic lol.
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