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Contributed by
deadly_blaZe
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Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My hands out before me
I feel for anything to hold onto
I stuggle for something to grasp
Helplessly blind to the world around me
My body jumps at the slightest sound.
Plunging farther into the unknown
A part of me wants to turn back
To remain forever in predictable certainty.
But I cant.
I wont.
I must explore the unseen
I long for something better.
One foot in front of the other
With hands still searching
I move ahead
Im unsure but never falter
Someday soon ill find what I search for
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deadly_blaZe
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2003-06-04 17:35:00]
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Re: Searching
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 10:54:22 AM AEST
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A great write! I can't understand why there aren't anymore comments and why more ppl haven't read this poem, it is a really good write and I reall enjoyed it. Anyway congratulations on writing such a good poem, I loved it.
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