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[aid] => mick
[title] => Occupational Hazard
[time] => 2019-01-04 14:38:18
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[bodytext] => It/'/s an occupational hazard
navigating this maze
of life
with dead end religions
and broken institutions
with group hug confusion
and crazy solutions
on how we could
all be friends
without the Freedom
of Common Sense
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Occupational Hazard
Contributed by
drone
on
Friday, 4th January 2019 @ 02:38:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It/'/s an occupational hazard
navigating this maze
of life
with dead end religions
and broken institutions
with group hug confusion
and crazy solutions
on how we could
all be friends
without the Freedom
of Common Sense
Copyright ©
drone
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2019-01-04 14:38:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Occupational Hazard
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 5th January 2019 @ 03:58:39 AM AEST (User
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quick and very much to the point
which is true, very much so.
the philosopher is like the scientist,
it should be and could be a huge
scientific notion, the meaning
of liberty, equality, for all
and not just some.
We think of syllogisms
in the thought process,
sometimes we spend
more time and money
on common house
pets, a Venn diagram
an old person with
no money, a new
generation, and
you can have a
diet coke, and
it would be nice
if seeds that
grew diversified
crops were not
owned by chemical
corporations,
or the monetary
policies of a nation
were sometimes
solely responsible
for recessions that
cost people jobs.
drone, I am just
trying to decipher
your poem, it is
a good one because
I do not know all
the questions it
asks, nor the idea
you put forth.
this life, this
one and only.
If you grow old
you see a few
generations go
by, and at
what age
do we wonder
what your words
mean?
It is a lot to think
about, an immense
amount.
good write, simple and to the point!
Peace!
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Re: Occupational Hazard
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Tuesday, 8th January 2019 @ 11:13:19 PM AEST (User
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Your word choices are interesting. Some of us navigate this life, and some of us sit back and let it navigate us!
We have more choices than any generation.
Too much information to make sense of.
Everyone has to decide for themselves just how big their universe will be. We can/'/t be the world.
softerware
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