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What you wrote
Cause for me there ain`t no antidote
Your words tore me to the core
So bad I can`t read them no more
Torn from scorn
Wish I was never born
All love lost
Nothing left to adorn
I`m all out of hope
Lost all faith
Just trying to cope
To save myself from
Hanging by a rope
This is how I feel
Unlike you
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What You Wrote

Contributed by jamesstockdale on Friday, 25th January 2019 @ 07:00:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I can no longer read
What you wrote
Cause for me there ain`t no antidote
Your words tore me to the core
So bad I can`t read them no more
Torn from scorn
Wish I was never born
All love lost
Nothing left to adorn
I`m all out of hope
Lost all faith
Just trying to cope
To save myself from
Hanging by a rope
This is how I feel
Unlike you
All I wrote was real

Copyright © jamesstockdale ... [ 2019-01-25 19:00:49]
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Re: What You Wrote (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Friday, 25th January 2019 @ 08:33:00 PM AEST
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James, I love you, man. Your pain is tearing me up. if I had the words, as if words were medicine, I would spend days trying to create an /'/antidote/'/, as you put it.

My heart aches for your pain. Keep writing. Sometimes, that is the only medicine that works.

Your friend,

Mike

Re: What You Wrote (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 26th January 2019 @ 02:31:44 AM AEST
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A heartbreaking poem that I hope has brought you some measure of relief by sharing with us.
You are a teacher, and many will find ways to cope knowing they are not alone. Few can read your poems and not find themselves somewhere in your words.
There is purpose to sharing grief, and it is to heal others. Thank you for your candor.
softerware

Re: What You Wrote (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 26th January 2019 @ 09:54:39 PM AEST
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This one cut me "to the core" too. I/'/ve been on both ends of similar situations; I/'/m glad I got the experience young so I was better prepared for the future. If you haven/'/t already, delete that message or rip up that letter. It/'/ll be the first step in setting you free. God bless you and may the Lord wrap His arms around you with His comfort,

Deidra

Re: What You Wrote (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Sunday, 27th January 2019 @ 03:24:44 PM AEST
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This is something I NEEDED to read.
Because I/'/ve been holding on to yesterday,
For too many todays.

Re: What You Wrote (User Rating: 1 )
by Zaf_Stud on Sunday, 27th January 2019 @ 07:32:37 PM AEST
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Although you have taken out your inside out, it does take a lion/'/s heart to bear such toughness of life and still manage to speak aloud!

There are very few with such sturdiness!

Sure many will see themselves in this so true mirror that you have erected!

Re: What You Wrote (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 1st February 2019 @ 07:38:23 AM AEST
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And it`s people like that that makes it hard for me to trust anyone.

Very sad, written with lots of emotion!

Well, we YPDCers are very glad you were born!

Keepa writin`!

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