|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
cut, cut away
Contributed by
delerioustearz
on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
|
i've cut the arms
i've cut the legs
i've tried to cut away the plague
thats ever so taking over me
away from life
a darker destiny
i've cut the shoulder
i've cut my heart
i've tried to cut out the idea that got me to start
the self mutilation
stopping my skin from starvation
i've cut my neck
i've cut my wrist
Tried to cut out the feeling of bliss
that lingers on
as my marks on my body sing their song
I've cut my foot
i've cut my face
I've cut and cut trying to erase
Mistakes
Moves
Decisions I've made
I've cut the veins
The arteries
What else is there on my body
That i can test my silver
test my blades
until this life mine gets taken away.....
Copyright ©
delerioustearz
... [
2003-06-04 21:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: cut, cut away
(User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 01:03:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow, this was a powerful poem, especially since i can relate, having had many problems with self-mutilation. Very good piece, keep writing! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
|
|
Re: cut, cut away
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 07:10:01 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very powerful. I hope you find what you are looking for to help you stop cutting.
sleepless_siren |
|
|
Re: cut, cut away
(User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 02:42:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
good write : )
x_x_x |
|
|
Re: cut, cut away
(User Rating: 1 )
by xraz0rx on
Saturday, 21st June 2003 @ 11:44:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I Loved this poem. But i can also relate alot. i did/ still do have a problem with self mutilation. KEEP WRITING =) *Hugs for you*
.Missy. |
|
|
Re: cut, cut away
(User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 01:42:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this is an amazing poem...i know exactly how you fell...im goin through the same thing i know how badly it sucks....this is very powerful....i love this poem...great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
