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Fire
Contributed by
undead_poet14
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Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You took my heart
And reduced it to ashes
You held my very soul
And turned it to putty in your hands
Youd rather have a loose slut
Than merely hold my hand
You set my aflame
And watched me burn
You gazed into my eyes
And made them bleed
You touched my face
And left it scorched and vapid
You set my aflame
And watched my burn
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Re: Fire
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 03:34:58 PM AEST
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wow loved this... was this written after a break up? To be honest I think this could be a bit longer, but was excellent none the less keep on writing! Loved the imagery in this.
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