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[bodytext] => Deafening the Rivers Roar.
Thundering her Overature.
Never ending symphony.
Ocean mother calling thee.
Pathways worn by time alone.
Down the canyons. Going home.
Hell bent for the peaceful sea.
To lie in sweet serenity.
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River symphony
Contributed by
softerware
on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 02:37:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Deafening the Rivers Roar.
Thundering her Overature.
Never ending symphony.
Ocean mother calling thee.
Pathways worn by time alone.
Down the canyons. Going home.
Hell bent for the peaceful sea.
To lie in sweet serenity.
Copyright ©
softerware
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2019-04-09 02:37:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: River symphony
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 04:35:53 AM AEST (User
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Queen Softy, what`s up? Are you trying to make us lower life forms look bad? 😉
This is so beautiful. So, so beautiful.
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Re: River symphony
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 03:13:06 PM AEST (User
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What Timmy said.
Lovely indeed!!! |
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Re: River symphony
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 03:24:50 PM AEST (User
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If beautiful had a picture next to it in the dictionary
this would be it. I cannot go philosophical with this.
I just want to lie down under a shade tree on a
clear sunny day and daydream as the clouds fly so effortlessly overhead.
BEAUTIFUL!!
Rich |
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Re: River symphony
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Tuesday, 9th April 2019 @ 06:29:08 PM AEST (User
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This is one gem of a poem, a graceful transcience of the never-ending journeys that rivers undertake, and will remain as diuturnal as a river itself. |
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Re: River symphony
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jecks on
Wednesday, 10th April 2019 @ 07:40:27 PM AEST (User
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Love the rhyme scheme! and the imagery is beautiful.This is certainly one of my favorites of yours! |
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Re: River symphony
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Thursday, 11th April 2019 @ 09:21:26 AM AEST (User
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Lovely, powerful and thrilling, all at the same time!
I really enjoyed your imagery, metre, and the punctuation was spot on.
S. |
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Re: River symphony
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Thursday, 11th April 2019 @ 08:25:09 PM AEST (User
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As it seems we all agree, this is lovely ands calls to. I miss my MO river walks.
ming |
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