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[title] => Goodbye with Love
[time] => 2019-05-17 04:20:20
[hometext] => Sometimes a moment is enough.
[bodytext] => He waited til I trusted him. Outlasted my past.
I felt his light shine deep within The darkness I held fast.
Held my sleeve; he let me grieve; His tears old scars retraced.
This man who wouldnt leave me, alone to face my fate.
Sought the shadows round me; Each torn and ragged space,
This man who saw and found me, lost and out of place.
Who left too soon without me;
If only flowers could sing;
Id carve this stone about thee;
Your love meant everything.
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Goodbye with Love
Contributed by
softerware
on
Friday, 17th May 2019 @ 04:20:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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He waited til I trusted him. Outlasted my past.
I felt his light shine deep within The darkness I held fast.
Held my sleeve; he let me grieve; His tears old scars retraced.
This man who wouldnt leave me, alone to face my fate.
Sought the shadows round me; Each torn and ragged space,
This man who saw and found me, lost and out of place.
Who left too soon without me;
If only flowers could sing;
Id carve this stone about thee;
Your love meant everything.
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softerware
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2019-05-17 04:20:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Goodbye with Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 17th May 2019 @ 08:39:17 AM AEST (User
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What a wonderful write..
Sad but inspirational too.
Also a great flow! Tops! |
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Re: Goodbye with Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by thelaststraw on
Friday, 17th May 2019 @ 02:54:09 PM AEST (User
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Smooth poetry nice remembrance. Only thing I would suggest is not so many He since it is understood. Well Done. |
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Re: Goodbye with Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by thelaststraw on
Friday, 17th May 2019 @ 11:35:44 PM AEST (User
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Much better and smoother read. Thanks. |
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Re: Goodbye with Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 07:05:06 PM AEST (User
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such sadness in this flow
*if only flowers could sing*
excellent line.... |
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Re: Goodbye with Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 21st May 2019 @ 12:51:48 AM AEST (User
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this piece brings the reader down to earth.
yes it is amazing how love will never leave you alone
regardless of how many times you ask and then tell
it to leave you be. love usually has the tendency to
work its way through our walls while leaving them
standing and completely intact wanting to share every
intricate aspect that makes us who we are, the good
the bad and the ugly. "if you love something let it go;
if it never comes back then it was never meant to be..
but if it does then it will mean just that much more"
love always has a way of finding you just when
you need it the most even if it isnt in the shape
or form you were expecting or hoping for.
Another brilliant piece my friend you never cease
to amaze :))
Rich |
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