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[title] => The Quest
[time] => 2019-05-17 15:16:57
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[bodytext] => Her native American smile enticing
her movement an art form
rendering me helpless
This spirit reaches to hold solid ground
yet her soul demands fulfillment
grasping, all I reach is air
I retreat slipping back into her domain
this spirit engulfed
Conquered
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The Quest
Contributed by
thelaststraw
on
Friday, 17th May 2019 @ 03:16:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Her native American smile enticing
her movement an art form
rendering me helpless
This spirit reaches to hold solid ground
yet her soul demands fulfillment
grasping, all I reach is air
I retreat slipping back into her domain
this spirit engulfed
Conquered
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Re: The Quest
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 12:44:23 AM AEST (User
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I have many friends in the tribal gaming industry that would appreciate your affectionate sentiments.
..This spirit engulfed. Conquered.
your last words have the finality of a signature. A fitting closure to a well crafted quest.
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Re: The Quest
(User Rating: 1 ) by Invierno on
Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 04:05:30 AM AEST (User
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A people once 130,000,000 strong (1/3 of the current USA population) now reduced to 5.4 million.
It/'/s a tragedy Shakespeare couildn/'/t conjure.
She so8unds like an unwitting enchantress, where her unplanned movements are magic to the eye that sees.
Well done capturing a fine nuance.
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Re: The Quest
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 02:28:03 PM AEST (User
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Mike and Jaye said it well.
Great writing..... Refreshing piece. |
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Re: The Quest
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 18th May 2019 @ 07:00:46 PM AEST (User
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I can imagine the struggle
as her essence overwhelms you,
interesting flow. |
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Re: The Quest
(User Rating: 1 ) by SPOKENWORDARTIST on
Tuesday, 21st May 2019 @ 05:22:12 PM AEST (User
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Well done |
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