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[title] => The Bridge
[time] => 2019-07-16 21:31:46
[hometext] => The more we learn, the less we know.
[bodytext] => We sat down in the parlor, waiting for our turn,
To see a famed clairvoyant, wondering what we’d learn.
You stand before a mirror, the psychic told my friend.
I see your image smiling as it fades away and then,
On the glass there is a heart, what does this mean to you?
My girlfriend whispered softly, she was someone that I knew .
I thought little of it, until we were alone.
I’ll not pretend to comprehend, the things that she was shown.
I leave you with the memory, she shared of loves great power,
Recalling her twin sister, who only lived an hour.
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The Bridge
Contributed by
softerware
on
Tuesday, 16th July 2019 @ 09:31:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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We sat down in the parlor, waiting for our turn,
To see a famed clairvoyant, wondering what we’d learn.
You stand before a mirror, the psychic told my friend.
I see your image smiling as it fades away and then,
On the glass there is a heart, what does this mean to you?
My girlfriend whispered softly, she was someone that I knew .
I thought little of it, until we were alone.
I’ll not pretend to comprehend, the things that she was shown.
I leave you with the memory, she shared of loves great power,
Recalling her twin sister, who only lived an hour.
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Re: The Bridge
(User Rating: 1 ) by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 17th July 2019 @ 01:04:20 AM AEST (User
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Your lead-in is gospel.
This is a bit over my head which proves your point.
Very unique piece!!!! Makes you think! |
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Re: The Bridge
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 17th July 2019 @ 05:17:03 AM AEST (User
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ooh kinda spooky
there is much of the unknown
we will never know
though I think this may be over my head too |
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Re: The Bridge
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 18th July 2019 @ 11:43:26 AM AEST (User
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Memories are powerful things. As far as clairoyance..
Im not much of a believer because so many of them
draw conclusions from your answers to specific
questions that they asked you....showing me that
its like a psychological guessing game of sorts which
Im sure can help recessed memories resurface. I truly
believe that we never actually forget things as much
as it is our minds filing things away and losing the key
to that particular lock box.
If you had seen the same image as your girlfriend
had Im sure that it would have meant something
entirely different to you. The human mind is one
of God*s creations that we will never be able to
fully understand. It is just too complex for us to
comprehend. Your pieces never cease to amaze
me. Brilliance in its truest form as always my
friend.
Rich
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