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back when!
Contributed by
apartment213
on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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back in childhood
back in my other world
back way back when
dads voice struck a chord
turned me white
back when so far back
god died when i was 12
mom lost her titlle
although i loved her
mother is just a woman
A PERSON!
back a few years now
i burried them both
i burried them as i choked
back when i was a kid
back when they dont think
i remembered what they did
way back when
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Re: back when!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:05:27 AM AEST
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| Kenny this is Yoseff.... I think this is your best work. Honestly. As you know, if there's a time that I'm going to be honest, it's now. |
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Re: back when!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 07:15:48 AM AEST
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Kenny, this is awesome!!
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Re: back when!
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 08:23:05 AM AEST
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good write
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Re: back when!
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 09:19:47 AM AEST
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Kenny a great write here.
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Re: back when!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 09:33:15 AM AEST
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This is awesome! Great work!!
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Re: back when!
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 10:23:24 AM AEST
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| You did not do bad on this. It is often hard to write about the memories we have of those we care about. It sounds like that part of your youth was a tough time. Maybe one day you will be better because of it. |
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