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Lost in my fears
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 08:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Aimlessly staring into the dark abyss
Hopelessly drowning in a pool of tears
Locked in a room of blackness
Curled up in a corner lost in my fears
Trapped in the darkness
Only a peek of light shines on me
Lost in a void of nothingness
waiting to be set free
Harnessed in my mind
trying to make these haunting
visions go away
All my memories have gone blind
I want to break free
but I'll never see the day
I've fallen to the ground
and I've cried all my tears
I am no where to be found
because I'm lost in my fears.
Copyright ©
youngpoet1989
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2003-06-06 08:35:00]
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Re: Lost in my fears
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 09:05:52 AM AEST
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Fantastic poem! I especialy like the last 2 lines. Very graphic imagery.
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Re: Lost in my fears
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 01:57:35 PM AEST
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| wow, GREAT write! I loved it! Great imagery, i liked the end. Keep writing! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: Lost in my fears
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:33:32 PM AEST
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| wow...i love this... |
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Re: Lost in my fears
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 02:14:58 AM AEST
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You never lose all your fears they are a natural part of your survival kit. Part of your experience that alerts you to danger.
Oh yes they are overpowering you now on occaisions but the more you go through only to find you eventually emerge non the worse the more you will be able to put them behined you..
Of course if you can't you will go completely insane
How long have you been like this?
Have yo sought advice or help. Nobody can get through this life entirely on their own. Remember our natural context is part of a tribe. |
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Re: Lost in my fears
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by youngpoet1989 on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 11:47:00 PM AEST
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But im not going insane
I wrote this from my thoughts
im not really going through all these things im just writing about them. |
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Re: Lost in my fears
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 12:39:34 AM AEST
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I liked this poem! Im sure that alot of us feel this way sometimes because i know I do its just something that we can not help! Keep up with the good rights!
Lots of love,
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Re: Lost in my fears
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by Lele on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 11:17:14 PM AEST
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This poem looks like me, very upset person
that made tragic poem. This poem , for me,
is very sincer. I like it very much. Thanks.
Huges, Lendro M. Oliveira
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Re: Lost in my fears
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 12:49:09 AM AEST
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Wow awesome. You write with such understanding of how i feel having never gone through it yourself. I give u a big A+
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