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Plastic Flowers
Contributed by
ravenblack_phoenix
on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Plastic flowers,
Pasty skin,
Artificial love,
A taste of sin,
I can see through you,
This life you live,
I bet fire will melt you,
Now what do you have to give?
Your existence is fake,
Your eyes are phony,
All you do is take,
Everyone should think youre honey.
Well guess what -
I can see through you,
And this life that you live,
If I bend you enough I bet I could break you,
Now what do you have to give?
Your heart is empty,
Your synthetic blood is cold,
That plastic skin looks hefty,
And this game you play is getting old.
Everyone can see through you,
This so-called life you live,
If we leave you out to dry too long, I bet youd crack,
And now what do you have to give?
Lies, misconceptions,
Falsified love...
Broken hearts and friendships, thats all youve done.
Your existence is the epitome of fake,
Your eyes are manufactured,
All you do is take,
And now you can see that your plan is fractured.
I can see through you,
I can see you -
You and your plastic flowers...
Your pasty skin...
Your artificial love...
I can see you... Your personal sin...
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2003-06-06 13:05:00]
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by DOCTERKRISITN on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 01:46:33 PM AEST
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i really l this it straight to the point and you are truthfull and honest in this
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 03:31:29 PM AEST
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a hardhitting good write
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:10:40 PM AEST
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| this is so, so good...i love it... |
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 11:47:46 PM AEST
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great write! if you don't think this one is one of your better ones then i'm off to read more!
~*Riki*~ |
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:32:23 AM AEST
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Great write! I think it's wonderful.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by Ivy on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 12:34:47 PM AEST
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| A very straightforward write. I liked it, it is true. Few people are like that. Ivy |
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 10:57:35 PM AEST
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I love your honesty and straight forward nature in this poem. We are much alike in this aspect. I agree with you. Going through something right now that this poem fits to a tee!! BRAVO!!
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by knowWhat_kind on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:41:01 AM AEST
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| I think tis is a great poem it gets right to the point of telling people what they are great write |
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Re: Plastic Flowers
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by knowWhat_kind on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 01:41:23 AM AEST
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| I think this is a great poem it gets right to the point of telling people what they are great write |
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