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Please Take Me Home To Mummy
Contributed by
Rosewing
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Tuesday, 6th August 2002 @ 09:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The nightmare woke her from the dream Of the stranger with a sickly smile, His haunting face and soft spoken words All she wants is Mummy!
She had been playing in the sun kissed corn When snatched from under daddys eyes. Screams that no-one else could hear Please take me back to Mummy
Dont want to do the things he asks I know that its not right. His frightening eyes and strong hard hands Please take me home to Mummy.
Tears that flow, but all in vain He doesnt want to hear the cries His evil mind and sad twisted heart That took her from her Mummy
He covers his ears with his murderous hands To shelter from the screams. Inside his head the child still lives With a picture of her Mummy.
Silent, still, stiff and cold A tiny bundle of tattered clothes Discovered in an unknown ditch And never again to see Mummy.
Worse than beasts, lower than low The doctors treat his illness But they cannot bring a young life back They cant give her back to Mummy! Rosewing
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Re: Please Take Me Home To Mummy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 02:24:14 AM AEST (User
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This was inspiring, Rose. What a picture to portray, true innocence lost. And how many children have suffered this fate, only to distill hatered further into the hearts of men and women alike. Very sad, but there is a message here... as long as hatered exsists in the world, there will always be a "monster" out there waiting in the shadows... let's teach our children to love unconditionally, for there is no place in heaven for anything less. |
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Re: Please Take Me Home To Mummy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 02:37:04 AM AEST (User
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Great write, Rosewing!! It's so sad that so much of this is happening in the world today. Innocent lives are lost to the hands of these worthless people. This poem needs no revision..It's perfect as it is.. Keep up the good work.
Jenni |
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Re: Please Take Me Home To Mummy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jekisa on
Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 03:34:33 AM AEST (User
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Wow! Gave me chills. |
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Re: Please Take Me Home To Mummy
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 07:44:25 PM AEST (User
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Wonderfully inspired particularly in view of recent events over here.The standard on this site is very high I shall certainlky join |
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