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Lands of Truth
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
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Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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I hear your worried voice
Try to listen to your words
But Im too lost in my regret
Feeling like my hearts gonna burst.
I see the tears roll down your face
And want to end everything right then
I cant believe I let myself
Bring you here, and let you in.
Im sorry I brought you here
Into this dark world of mine.
Im sorry I gave in to my pain
And revealed to you my lies.
I would give everything I have
To take this painful knowledge from you
For you were so much happier not knowing
Now what do you have to do?
Your tears make me want to cry
Your sorrow now makes me want to lie
I want to tell you none of its true
I never wanted to worry you.
But now all your mind
Is focused on your concern
You cant do anything for me
You know Ill never learn.
So what was the point of dragging you
Into the nightmare I live in?
Youve entered the dark lands of truth
And theres no hope to believe in.
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BlackFire9786
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2003-06-07 06:05:00]
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Re: Lands of Truth
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 07:13:33 AM AEST
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Oh wow... this really made me feel... something. I'm just not sure exactly what it is. That feeling of being in so much hell but at the same time feeling bad about hurting someone else coz of it and that combination just sort of mixing into a dull but overpowering ache right in the pit of your stomach, along with the hopelessness of knowing you'll never learn... man, have I ever been there. Great write, it really got to me.
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Re: Lands of Truth
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 05:41:55 PM AEST
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i'm speechless, this spoke to me so, so much.. have been there myself.. actually i was the one who was 'dragged in'.. but thats not the point..
don't despair over things said and done, instead perhaps he/she can help you?
amazing poem, take care of yourself..
charlotte x_x_x (pm me if you feel like talking..) |
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Re: Lands of Truth
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 02:23:07 PM AEST
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amazing write lis! i love your poetry...it's always so deep and stuff...just one question though...is it about me? i love ya twin! love, peace and chicken grease!
Love Always,
me |
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