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Untitled
Contributed by
EmptyWords
on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Raining outside
she stands at the window
wrapped up in her sheets
smiling, feeling complete.
She ignores her reflection
as her fingers follow the raindrops
cascading down the glass,
her past creeps in
vivid memories sink in.
Now, looking straight at herself
her eyes submerge with tears
as she recalls
looking in the mirror
and seeing a lost, ugly girl.
Her angels arms find their way
around her shaking body
holding her tight from behind
his lips caress her neck
she sighs and closes her eyes.
with silence and a pause
enough time to collect thoughts
.......
she opens her eyes,
again, she looks at her reflection
and wiping away tears
(she smiles)
for the form of
true beauty in her eyes
is only present
in the heart of united lovers.
Copyright ©
EmptyWords
... [
2003-06-07 14:05:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:05:42 PM AEST
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true beauty only comes from within, we are blessed when we find someone who not only sees this beauty but brings it out..good write
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Re: Untitled
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:39:56 AM AEST
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| a beautiful sentiment...you write expressively and with clarity. it interesting to take on the perspective of someone else and you've done it well here. great write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:14:50 PM AEST
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this is a good poem very good writtin
Amanda ( spoiledbrat ) |
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