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Journeys
Contributed by
Rose
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Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
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mystical
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From the time we are conceived of the two cells run
Process of life forms have begun
Nine months for humans, some species sooner or more
All inside a fluid sac, secured from an outside quisitor
How the time comes, the mother knows to count
Giving life, she is push into this worlds account
The little form cries and kicks into this world
How all curled up and wrinkled, now, the body unfurled
Such is the beginning of years to teach
As this new life will learn from their peers to preach
That is one form of a journey to life as we see it
However, life to a journey can be indefinite
When we account the old ways of tribal laws
Somehow we seen their ways of mind travel as defective flaws
Just as a spirit came to them in a dream
Some would see this as an oddity, their rituals extreme
Or for example the ways of travel thru the afterlife
As scientists try to pick apart those who have this gift, like a knife
Because when those with this power came back
They could give accurate frames of time, right on track
Why must science always be critical in the unexplained?
When all of this is just part of life, evolving, the human mind still untrained
The time of life in the womb, to the time of death
In those times between, how we learn, grow into mature beings, taken in journeys, before our last breath
It is not just the travel of the material transportations of this world I speak
Those are wonderful man made inventions that we come to depend on in this space we seek
Evidence has presented itself time again; we can achieve those burning thoughts
Just as those who fought and lived in the time of the medieval Camelots
Myth and legends they call them you know, the stone carved tablets
To the time of Moses, the long trek he took, the voice from a burning bush admits
All journeys of time, and life, and most of all our thoughts to come alive from the past
For we have taken from that, and given to our future, may it come to last
I personally believe in mind journeys, the ones thoughts are visions of what is to come
How it may seem to you, I am off my equilibrium
Life is as I see it, not all human or animal species, here or in the universe
I have sat back; listened and opened my mind more to immerse
Seeing more, wanting to hear the travels of others
We are not alone in these travels; the journeys of many may well be alien sisters or brothers
Look into the realm of our minds, but also of those who speak of their realities
Not for fun in the zodiac, but for reason of truth and curiosity, the higher then formalities
Destiny becomes our existence of what we proclaim in this time of our living
Humanity is a journey as is the whole entire universe, as we are all not so forgiven
Amber Rose Yeager June 7, 2003
Our thoughts thru mind travel. Those who have the ability to reach into this realm are so gifted, as so by God or other powers to be. I do know we are not alone in this space of universe. Too many unexplained mysteries and events have taken place. Scientists like to use their machines to tear apart the mind, but I feel that a machine will never see inside, but I do feel the mind can see more then what a machine ever will. Aliens if you want to call them that have gone back to the beginning of time as we can recall it. Humans are just a small evolving race, just going thru certain phases. We have many more phases to go. I only hope our progress of knowledge keeps in step with the progress of evolution, as it has never stopped as some folks seem to think we the human race are it.
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Rose
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Re: Journeys
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 04:49:06 PM AEST
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Deeply intense write, Amber. So good to see you posting again.... Don't stay away so long next time...
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 04:57:08 PM AEST
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Thought provoking excellent write
Shari |
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Re: Journeys
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 05:18:21 PM AEST
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You ere undoubtedly correct in your concept of universal life and it's immensity in the cosmos.
The "battle" with the SARS virus has at last made public the fact that these viruses (and many others) arrive here in the dust from comets.
In other words life is prevalent throughout the universe though not necessarilly in the forms we see here. This is not surprising since the whole is made of the same "stuff" governed by the same laws.
What would be surprising (and unbeleivable) is that life only existed on this insignificant planet in this insignificant galaxy in an insignificant corner of the cosmos.
I'm with you all the way and found your poem
wonderfully conceived and skillfully written |
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Re: Journeys
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 05:20:38 PM AEST
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| Sorry for the error . Second word should read "are". |
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Re: Journeys
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by Rose on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:48:16 AM AEST
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| I find your thoughts interesting on how our universe lives. I have had these thoughts about what I have written here since I was about 7yrs. old. I have always been one with nature, living it as long as I can as a child, then of course adult life takes on a new meaning of adjusting to the human race as everyone else wants you to live it. :) (some humor there) I do believe we have other races, beings in this universe, surely with all the mysterious events in our worlds time of history, is it ever strange to our thoughts indeed. Do you ever hear a radio station on air, called, "Coast to Coast "with George Norry? He deals with folks, people who have documented, seen, disprove and or all kinds of strange, extraterrestial, events in all our earths time? A very extremely interesting radio show. It airs internationally as well as in the states. he talks of anything weird, strange, the dinosaurs, even your the "big Bang" therory. I just started writing about my deep thoughts on these issues, since I've had time to recup on a personal basis of those humanly emotional status feelings. I've decided to just go ahead and let my feelings go,and not care if folks think I am crazy or not. To have these thoughts at the age of 8 and keep them and still search for more like myself is just amazing indeed. Glad to have met you in this site, will look forward to many debates indeed. :) |
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Re: Journeys
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 11:10:21 AM AEST
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Well Amber,
You have the whole of Earths Human history in one poem here. The only downer from the ways of the ancients mind travelling is, as I see it, the consistent use of cocaine and other hallucinogenic substances derived from the plants, found everywhere there were and still are human civilisations. If there is a way of doing this kind of thing without the need for these substances, I'd like to know about it! Thinking, there is a way that we do this every day/night, dreams! If only we could be fully conscious while having a dream!
I liked this one also Amber, keep 'em coming my dear friend you're getting me thinking about things I like to again, thankyou.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Journeys
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 08:41:35 PM AEST
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I've just been watching a program on TV about the UFO sightings in PHOENIX recently. Hundreds of witnesses, recordings, etc. and yet the initial official reaction was to deny everything.
What does your government think we are?
Accepting that we are not alone in this galaxy could do nothing but improve our behaviour
towards eachother.
I look forward to many further discussions |
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Re: Journeys
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:06:08 PM AEST
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Wow girlfriend, this is some heavy duty stuff here.
Very good writing!
luv, huggs,
emy
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Re: Journeys
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 08:18:13 AM AEST
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Ah humanity and the company we keep.
The less I sleep, the more awake I become.
Thank you for sharing this. |
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Re: Journeys
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by bernard on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:46:36 AM AEST
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You are correct life is just a journey, If we all saw life from this aspect there would be less heartbreak in this world. We are all here today and gone tomorrow. Your writing on this subject is to be highly praised thank you for an excellent read.
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Re: Journeys
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 07:15:52 PM AEST
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| Dear Rose, this is my first discovery of your poetry. I, also read the last one posted. __You certainly do have a good mind! Thank God for it. Have fun with it and share it with us as often as you can. Bizzy |
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Re: Journeys
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:56:48 AM AEST
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hey girlfriend,
I''ve commented on thiss before but can't resist it again.
It's jus as mezmerizing as before.
I understand this one in many different ways.
It's still heavy dduty but yet it's a masterpeice.
Can u imaging the scientists and whatever, trying to diesect this write thru histrory?
It will happen.
Great job and we need more.
luv ya,
emy |
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Re: Journeys
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by emystar on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 11:18:43 PM AEST
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I hear ya and I agree with Jenni on all counts.
Awesome thoughts and we r not alone and probably never will be.
Yeah, we need more of u writing.
Hope u r getting your medical problems under control.
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Journeys
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:02:14 PM AEST
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I hear ya on this. The mind is very powerfull in many ways be it good or bad depends on which way we choose.
Good work, girlfriend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Journeys
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by angryhippylibral on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:00:16 PM AEST
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| Intense. |
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Re: Journeys
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by Rose on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 06:38:28 AM AEST
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| I am online again. Been gone a very long time. However, as I was reading over my writes, I picked this one, as Its still very true in how I still feel. I have found somone in my life remarried, and so far still working. I somehow cannot write the way I had. Im not a gifted writer as many on this site are. I beleive when the time is right, I will write again. I wanted to say how blessed I am and to say Thank You to all, and more so to Emy Starr. You go girl, and thank you so much. I never forgot what all you have done, said to me. Richard and I are in health problems at the time, so being online isn't what I like it to be. But thank you so much for keeping me posted in touch. LIfe is short, make the most of it, as you can. God gives us a plate, sometimes we think its too full, perhaps yes and no. Power of Prayer means alot and that plate can be alot less full when Prayer in groups is applied. thanks a bunch. Love ya all, Rose, aka AMber Rose Yeager/Lentz. |
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