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Untitled
Contributed by
sweetie4984
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Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You're deaf,
So I know you wont hear it.
You're blind,
So I know you dont see it.
You're numb,
So I know you wont feel it.
You're stubborn,
So I know you dont understand it
You mean a lot more to me,
than what you may think.
I have laughed with you.
I have fought with you.
I have cried over you.
And I have loved you.
I am only a girl.
A girl with so much to learn,
and with so much to learn,
I have more to offer.
But I wish you could realize
what exactly it is I am trying to say.
Hopefully you'll figure it out.
So, until then, I'll wait for that day.
Because:
Once you listen, you'll see it.
Once you see it, you'll feel it.
Once you feel it, you'll understand it
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sweetie4984
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2003-06-09 02:45:00]
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Re: Untitled
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 03:52:38 PM AEST
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I can't quite think of the right word to describe this. Almost... refreshing. I dunno. But the point is, I like it. It struck me as being very honest, very real and to the point. Great job!
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Re: Untitled
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 12:58:27 PM AEST
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| i think this is brilliant. i love the last 4 lines. great write, phil xxx |
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