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Give Me The Stars
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I can't stand to know you're so far away
When you should be by my side
I want you to kiss these tears away
To hold me and make it all okay
To promise me forever you'll stay
I want to hear you whisper in my ear
The words I need more than anything to hear
I want you to give me the stars
To go anywhere for me
To be everything I need
To be my one true love
I don't want to be alone anymore
Sitting here, crying on my bed
Giving everything up for you
Hating the way I feel
My heart so consumed with loving you
So deep that I could never go back
So give me something real
That I can hold onto for real
Not just in the way that I feel
You always say you're thinking
Show me something I can see
Words are just words and I need more
I'm all tangled up 'cause it all goes so slow
So slow that it aches just a little
'Cause I can only fall in love with you
When I'm body and soul right here with you
And right now it almost feels like
You're gone
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MoonlitAngel
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2003-06-09 18:05:00]
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Re: Give Me The Stars
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 10:03:36 PM AEST
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So full of emotion. I enjoyed this poem. I hope things work out the way you want them to.
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Re: Give Me The Stars
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:35:51 PM AEST
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Awww Moonlit, have you been reading my mind again?? Loved this so much..and can identify... Hope all works out for you soon...
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Re: Give Me The Stars
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 09:44:58 AM AEST
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This is brilliant, so full of emotion. Great writing!
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Re: Give Me The Stars
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 07:13:33 PM AEST
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| awww!! big huggs n' lotsa love, wishing you every happiness:) nessa |
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