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Your sweet cries
Contributed by
CarrieLynn
on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I hear a single childs cry
and look to heaven wondering why
I could not change my mind
I will never see my child shine
To heaven gone but not lost
I guess some one has to pay the cost
I didnt know what I had done
And now my price is that your gone
I was young with out a care
I know that doesnt make it fair
You would have been great I know
Because the stars in the sky show
I can see your beautiful face
of what you might look like today
You would have been perfect to me
But I am so sorry that I was naive
You must know I would take it back
All the burdens are now staked
I hate myself more everyday
To know I let them take you away
Out of my body your gentle self came
And now I must live with guilt and shame
You are my sun shinning sky
And each nightly dream I hear your sweet cries
Copyright ©
CarrieLynn
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2003-06-10 01:25:00]
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Re: Your sweet cries
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by deadly_blaZe on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 12:02:54 PM AEST
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'I hear a single childs cry
and look to the heavens wondering why'
i love that verse...well written..keep it up
XxEricaxX
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Re: Your sweet cries
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by wild_heart_of_fire on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 05:10:34 PM AEST
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awwwwwwwwwww.......this is good. it's really sad. keep writing! may you have bright and sunny days from now until forever ends. much love. (we have the same middle name) :-)
~*riki lynn*~ |
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