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I No Longer...
Contributed by
Goebelclm73
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Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 10:05:00 AM in AEST
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I no longer want to get off a plane
And see your lying face
Or experience your fake touch
And feel your cold embrace.
I no longer want to kiss your lips
To feel their filth on mine
I dont want to have you to hold
Without you, my world surely does shine.
I no longer want to share each day
Wrapped in your untrue love
I dont want to be with you
My heart, alone, is free as a dove!
I no longer want to share with you
Anything I hold dear
I dont want to whisper a single word
In your sleeping ear.
I no longer wish to share
Your hopes, dreams, and fears
I dont want to be there with you
To wipe away your deceiving tears.
But most of all I no longer want a day
When youd say, I Do
Because somewhere out there Ill find
A real womansomeone much better than you!!!
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Re: I No Longer...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 10:14:34 AM AEST
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very touching poem, I love it!
I hope that girl realizes what an idiot she is.
At least you have the courage to say this and keep going! I wish you the best always,
your friend,
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Re: I No Longer...
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by deadly_blaZe on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 11:43:20 AM AEST
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nicely put... hope you find what your lookin for!
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Re: I No Longer...
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by Goebelclm73 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 11:51:52 AM AEST
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Crazy,
Glad you liked it so much!!! I don't think that Melanie knows what she was missing out on, but then again, it doesn't matter, this happened a long time ago. She lied about so much...basically everything she told me was a lie....sounds fimiliar to me now that I think about it....I'm going through it all again...only this time I'm married....oh well, such is life.
Christopher
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Re: I No Longer...
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by Goebelclm73 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 11:55:04 AM AEST
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Erica,
Thank you for the comment!! Not sure I'll ever find what I'm looking for, I just don't think she exists.
Christopher
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Re: I No Longer...
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by XoIrishXo on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 01:32:22 PM AEST
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| WOW!! Nicely done!! Glad that I am not the one on the receiving end of this one!! Keep 'em coming!! XoXo |
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Re: I No Longer...
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by Goebelclm73 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 01:50:37 PM AEST
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Thanks for yet another sweet comment!! Yeah, I'll bet the girl on the receiving end of this poem wished she hadn't lied like she did too. Thanks so much for the comment(s)!
Christopher
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Re: I No Longer...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:23:56 PM AEST
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wow, very emotional, i love this one, and i agree with the other comments, i hope she realises how stupid she has been to let someone like you go!
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Re: I No Longer...
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by Goebelclm73 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:43:26 PM AEST
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Becca,
Thank you for the comment on my poem. The woman I wrote this for didn't/doesn't/won't ever really know what she lost in me, but it's ok, because that was long ago, what's unfortunate is...it's all happening again. :( Such is life.
Thank you!!
Christopher
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Re: I No Longer...
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:23:38 PM AEST
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great poem, nice venting, your talent shines through, and around the corner will be someone that see the true gem that you are
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Re: I No Longer...
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by Goebelclm73 on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:49:32 PM AEST
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Shari,
Thank you for the comment!! And maybe one day someone will appreciate me for what I am...until then, I have much more venting to do!! Thanks!!
Christopher
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