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Emotion's Ballad 2 - To Lonliness
Contributed by
uncooked
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Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
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Somedays you can be so lovely
Painted with honesty, trust, sincerity
Clear footprints for me to follow
Open hands, open mouth, calling me
Drawing me further into you
I try to make myself transparent
No more games, no masks
You're the one, I won't screw this up
I want this round to be different
I swear I'll never hurt you
So help me God
But somedays you make me weak
You leave me shaking, trembling
You've gone some where I can't follow
I'm stranded in the fog of your moods
What gives you the right to do this
I've tried so hard for you
I've had to overcome so much
Had to take so much grief
To be here with you
Now that I'm here
Its not good enough
When will it be enough
My legs are tired from running
After your turned back
Please turn around
I just want to be help
To hide in your sanctuary
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uncooked
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2003-06-10 12:45:00]
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Re: Emotion's Ballad 2 - To Lonliness
(User Rating: 1 )
by norm on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 02:13:15 PM AEST
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you'd have to be there
i'm sure you are right
to me it seems
like a hopeless fight.
I know not the worth
of your effort to win,
don't fight too hard
learn to give in...
to quote Kenny R..know when to hold
know when to fold!..
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Re: Emotion's Ballad 2 - To Lonliness
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 05:25:06 AM AEST
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Beautiful words that I can relate to. Well done.
~ Moonlit |
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