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final
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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im through.
this is my goodbye for yesterday
and these are all the words i meant to say
today is my final day on earth
and my final breath was used
to say these words.
so goodbye.
for now.
goodbye
til tomorrow.
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2003-06-10 17:25:00]
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Re: final
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by tease_whizz on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 05:26:04 PM AEST
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| simply written but very effective. i like the subtle twist and the element of irony it adds to the poem. i hope this isn't your 'final' poem! keep writing, Kate x |
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