|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I'd Like to introduce you to meII
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
|
My name is Lisa Marie Taylor
Yea, my mom was an Elvis fan
I dont live in reality much
I have my own fantasy land.
I see more evil than I do good
More darkness than I do light
I dont like daytime very well
I fit in better at night
Im not a good church-going girl
But Im not in a Satanist cult.
I am no longer a child
But Im not yet an adult.
I am not a demon from hell
But Im not a saint.
My light dont shine brighter than anyone elses
But it is not extraordinarily faint.
I am sometimes very confused
I have 50 different answers to every question.
I will not accept help from anyone
I get angry at every suggestion.
I have many scars all over my legs
And some on my arms too.
Theyre scars I wish I didnt have
I wish I could undo.
For I sometimes take knives to my skin
I can account for every scar.
And one day after many more cuts
My body will match my heart.
I am often haunted
By flashbacks and memories
Sometimes I see people that arent there
People from my past that I dont want to see.
Sometimes I think Im screwed up in the head
I think Im beyond repair.
I am not happy most of the time
For some reason Im lost in despair.
My brothers suicidal, a druggie, and depressed
My sisters a drunk and a whore
I dont wanna take the same path that they did
But this key in my hand seems to fit that door.
I have enough friends to keep me going
But they arent really friends with me.
For if I had one wish, it would be
For someone to know me truly.
I am known to myself
For sitting in dark corners to cry
I am known by everyone else
For being tough-never letting a tear escape my eye.
For I know myself as insecure and lonely.
Someone screaming for help to come.
Everyone else sees me as the help
The shoulder they can cry on.
My grades are good, I havent been in trouble
Many others see me as great.
But Im just a girl with a hidden past
Concealing her anger and hate.
So if you ever meet me
Dont be tricked like the rest of the crowd.
Look into my eyes and know
With every breath I scream out loud.
Copyright ©
BlackFire9786
... [
2003-06-11 07:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I'd Like to introduce you to meII
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 09:04:16 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
your talent shines here, this is a great outlet for the hurt and pain, also to share any joys.
keep writing you have a flare
Shari |
|
|
Re: I'd Like to introduce you to meII
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:14:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You know, I think I might like this version just a little bit better than the original. I really like the new ending. Both are great, though. Well done.
~ Moonlit |
|
|
Re: I'd Like to introduce you to meII
(User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:21:49 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I like this version better too, but since i had already posted the first one, i just put both up. Thank you for all your great comments, i appreciate it! |
|
|
Re: I'd Like to introduce you to meII
(User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:46:23 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
it doesn't matter what you write...it's always good...ugh..i am filled with envy. love ya much!
your twin,
~*riki lynn~ |
|
|
Re: I'd Like to introduce you to meII
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:01:39 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hey..I like this ending too...
Hugs
Jenni |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
