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A Love That's Real
Contributed by
Goebelclm73
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Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I can never find the words,
Or know exactly what to say
I always beat around the bush
Its just my silly way.
Sometimes I find it hard
To express the way I feel
For fear that the other person
Isn't being real
So when it seems a I'm a little hesitant
Saying whats on my mind
Its nothing that you've done
But a fear of being blind
Not being able to see
What lies in our road ahead
And praying its not a dream
As I lay down to go to bed
I know you feel the risk is high,
To ever love again
And you need your aching heart
To take time and slowly mend
So patiently Ill wait
Giving you strength to heal
All along showing you a love
A love thats finally real.
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Goebelclm73
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2003-06-11 10:45:00]
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Re: A Love That's Real
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:01:31 AM AEST
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very well written
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Re: A Love That's Real
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by Goebelclm73 on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 04:06:24 PM AEST
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Shari,
Thank you so much!
Christopher
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Re: A Love That's Real
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:21:02 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful. It really touched me. I think you said the words I've always needed to hear. Too bad they weren't written for me, lol. :P
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Re: A Love That's Real
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by Goebelclm73 on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:55:04 AM AEST
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Moonlit,
Thank you!! I'm glad my poem touched you so deeply!! I wrote this poem knowing and hoping it would have a lasting effect on people, so in all truth, it was written for you and every one else that enjoys it's meaning!
Christopher
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Re: A Love That's Real
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 08:38:04 PM AEST
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i'm actually speechless.....
Wonerful again Christopher, truly inspiring, beautiful, brilliant!!
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Re: A Love That's Real
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by Goebelclm73 on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 09:23:23 PM AEST
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Becca,
Thank you so much for the comment!! I'm glad you liked it!!
Christopher
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Re: A Love That's Real
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by stargazer on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 07:04:24 PM AEST
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Breath taking. It's like you can read my mind. I told him I would wait for him... that was amazing. I am left speechless...
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Re: A Love That's Real
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by Goebelclm73 on
Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 06:52:26 PM AEST
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Amy,
Thank you for the comment!!! Sometimes waiting for someone can be the best.....sometimes :( never mind those other times though, lol
Christopher
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