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Sun Set
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow
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Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The air is cool, moving subtly
Trying not to stir up
Any unwanted feelings,
You can see tiny lights
Fly around in the velvet sky,
As if looking for something lost
Chorus
Just laying there in the sand
Feeling what fleeting warmth is left,
The fire went out only moments ago,
Yet it feels its been gone for hours before
Watching the sun lose her ground
Falling ever so slightly, from the skies
Shedding a tear, Id hope never to see
Her golden tears,
Glimmering ever so brightly
So sad to see the sun hide herself
In the ocean full of tears,
Leaving this world feeling dark
With the moons despairing glow,
Oh how night feels so cold without you
Chorus
Feeling useless and emptiness
Burdens my eyes, trying to
Draw out tears from a dry soul,
They fall to the night
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Re: Sun Set
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:08:31 AM AEST
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| Nice song lyric you have here. Thank you for feeding my soul with some inspiration, been looking for some inspiration to write my next song. Thank you |
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Re: Sun Set
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:09:15 AM AEST
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beautiful
Shari |
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Re: Sun Set
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by JamesHowlett on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 10:51:28 AM AEST
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A truely wonderful poem.
-James |
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Re: Sun Set
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 07:36:04 PM AEST
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| very beautiful with vivid images, your velvet sky is breathtaking, i love this:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Sun Set
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by Chenobi on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 12:31:51 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful. I couldn't help but seeing a sunset in my mind while reading it. So that's good. Very descriptive! |
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