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Someone In My Life
Contributed by
Goebelclm73
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Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Everywhere I look, I see couples hand in hand
Walking close together, on the starlit sand.
Sometimes their eyes meet, and somehow they just know
What the other is thinking, their hearts just seem to glow.
A touch, a smile, or just a warm embrace,
I see the happiness inside, its painted on their face.
I admire the old man and woman, together for so long
To this day he holds her close, in his arms so strong.
Day in, day out, I envy those things I see
I want someone in my life, Id like these things for me.
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Goebelclm73
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2003-06-13 10:45:00]
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Re: Someone In My Life
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by PrncssVGirl2217 on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:01:00 AM AEST
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| I really love your poem it explains how I feel everyday walking through school, or a store. I get really jealous because I don't get to see my boyfriend every day and it makes me feel like I don't even have one. |
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Re: Someone In My Life
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by norm on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 11:08:12 AM AEST
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the poem you wrote is great
might even say, "First Rate"
You'll get your girl before,
That closing swinging door |
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Re: Someone In My Life
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 01:30:18 PM AEST
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| I know this feeling all too well... hopefully it won't last much longer though. Good write! |
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Re: Someone In My Life
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 02:25:36 PM AEST
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| excellent write |
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Re: Someone In My Life
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by Stalkee on
Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 09:22:10 PM AEST
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| a great write...i go through this everyday...it just doesnt seem fait sometimes does it? but though i do want someone in my life, i also don't....because its always fallen apart before too long with me, ha...well life has never been too kind to me...so thats ok i guess =) |
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Re: Someone In My Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 07:48:05 AM AEST
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A beautiful write of longing and desire...
Jenni |
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