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Secrets of Her Mind
Contributed by
BlackFire9786
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Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
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The girl who stands
Alone but firm
And looks so content
You soon will learn
Has inside her the darkness
That goes unseen
Has inside her the darkness
Of every living thing
The most outspoken woman
You soon will find
Has more secrets
Than the rest combined
Though she said she told u everything
You should know, she lied
Because you will never know anything
Of the Secrets of Her Mind
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BlackFire9786
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2003-06-14 02:45:00]
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Re: Secrets of Her Mind
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by AngryBunny on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 10:52:15 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed that, although I cannot say I relate too much because I choose not to be outspoken. But yes, no one will know secrets of the mind. Excellent write. |
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Re: Secrets of Her Mind
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 11:32:33 PM AEST
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This is so true. Everyone is more than what they seem to be. People should learn to look deeper. Great write.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Secrets of Her Mind
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 06:51:57 AM AEST
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Excellent Lisa, really deep and powerful.
Lovely.
x_x_x |
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Re: Secrets of Her Mind
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 09:24:51 AM AEST
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| I LOVE this poem,and can totally relate to every part of it! I wish I could find more poems like this! |
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