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I CAN THINK OF REASONS
Contributed by
Anglea
on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 07:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As I looked up at the midnight sky tonight,
I wondered to myself.
What was the reason for you leaving?
Was I not strong enough for you,
or was I too independant?
Did I not open myself up enough,
or were my words so truthful
they cut you like a knife?
Was I not a good listener?
or were my interpretations correct?
Copyright ©
Anglea
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2003-06-14 19:25:00]
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Re: I CAN THINK OF REASONS
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 09:04:38 PM AEST
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well written
Shari
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Re: I CAN THINK OF REASONS
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by vincy on
Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 11:55:49 PM AEST
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You are just starting to pick up momentum
and the poem ends,
only one question mark necessitates
you can let the questions flowing
'were my interpretations correct'
is also questionable. |
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Re: I CAN THINK OF REASONS
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:18:31 AM AEST
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So many questions, so little answers... or few... whatever. Good write, I personally really like it.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: I CAN THINK OF REASONS
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:19:55 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc... I have to agree with Vincy.... the poem ended kind of abruptly... left me wanting to read more..but it is a very good write
Jenni |
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