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VIETNAM VET
Contributed by
wordsmith
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Saturday, 14th June 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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VIETNAM VET
Look. A falling leaf Another, then Another
Sacrifice the hero
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2003-06-14 23:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: VIETNAM VET
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 12:47:30 AM AEST (User
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Although this does not have the real format of a Haiku, it is a very profound write...
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Re: VIETNAM VET
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 12:49:33 AM AEST (User
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Indeed very profound.
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Re: VIETNAM VET
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 09:52:08 PM AEST (User
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And the irony of it all is that it is happening all over again,
In a foreign land our young men are falling like leaves from the USA tree!
When will this be over....make if fast Please!!!
This poem may not be right in form...
But left me feeling forlorn.
Good poem!
lovingcritters
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Re: VIETNAM VET
(User Rating: 1 ) by slay797 on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 12:01:10 PM AEST (User
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This came up as a link under the least read haiku poem. I liked it way better than the most read. |
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