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An evenings assumption
Contributed by
wordsy
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Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
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oops
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A breathless desire of darkest endeavor To beckon of love and then wait forever To reach but not grasp at loves fleeting traces To be standing outside of ones sweet embraces Left to lie bleeding in wanton unrest Enduring the yearning of hearts put to test Seeking that which is yet not around To look and not see that any is found Humble heart calling and still is not heard Souls thoughts of comfort from cares gift in word Forever in search of dreams now long faded Of a time that I know when love was not jaded
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Re: An evenings assumption
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 06:19:38 PM AEST (User
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great
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Re: An evenings assumption
(User Rating: 1 ) by garyh on
Wednesday, 9th July 2003 @ 05:58:00 AM AEST (User
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its good... i don't like it when people don't break up their work into stanzas... but it is all in writing style i guess.. so i can't hold you against that :D
so good work |
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