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for pleasure and for pain
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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touch me, kiss me, rape me, kill me
do whatever you want to do
bite me, scratch me, punch me, stab me
i just want to suffer for you
***** me then leave me, forget about me
this is how it has to be
use and abuse me, just another cheap whore
but i'll drain you more than you'll drain me
call me names and pull my hair
invite your friends, i don't ***** care
fill me up, then leave me, somehow still hollow
i'm 20, depraved, i don't charge, and i swallow
i'm everything you could ever need
so eager to be what you want me to be
and i'll never tell, it'll be our little secret
just give me a chance, you will not regret
i just need to be used
i just want to be hurt
i'm nothing before you
at your feet, i'm just dirt
just waiting in chains
for you to "come" again
to sate my filthy appetite
for pleasure and for pain
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Cancer
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2003-06-16 06:05:00]
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Re: for pleasure and for pain
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 06:56:24 AM AEST
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| i like this...again its dark, depraved but brutally honest. i like the sado-masochistic element to it but its seem more like a comment on life in general. excellent write, Kate x |
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Re: for pleasure and for pain
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by hardcoreputa on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 09:55:09 AM AEST
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| wow... not your usual style... but still dark and great. ~Apryl |
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Re: for pleasure and for pain
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:59:39 AM AEST
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Cant see why you want to be a slave to your desires, but each to their own I guess.
Liked this poem had all the dark qualities I like in poetry, Keep it up Cancer. |
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Re: for pleasure and for pain
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by MX on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 04:19:28 PM AEST
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whoa...harsh.
good poem though.
-MX- |
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Re: for pleasure and for pain
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 09:14:21 PM AEST
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| your words hold me suspended...the expression of such raw emotions makes for an interesting read...I've read much of your work to date and keep going back to pure, undiluted, psychopathic rage...ta for sharing....rosie |
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Re: for pleasure and for pain
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 14th October 2003 @ 08:57:04 PM AEST
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| wow........you get inside their head........awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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