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My Chance
Contributed by
Goebelclm73
on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I want my chance with her love
To show her how I feel
I wanna open up this heart of mine
So she can see Im real
I want my chance with her love
To hold her by the fires light
I wanna look into her eyes
And see them sparkle bright
I want my chance with her love
To gently hold her hand
While walking side by side
Next to the ocean's endless sand
I want my chance with her love
To run my fingers through her hair
I wanna hold her close to me
So she'll know I'm always there
I want my chance with her love
I wanna be where she is
I want my chance with her love
But unfortunately... she is his.
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Goebelclm73
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2003-06-16 19:05:00]
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Re: My Chance
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by starshine on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 07:50:44 PM AEST
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HI- Your poem is certainly for either sex. No matter how old your poetry is- events such as you describe never change from year to year.
Heartwarming!
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Re: My Chance
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 08:12:17 PM AEST
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true, this seems to be an age old problem, good write
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Re: My Chance
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 08:20:40 PM AEST
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Starshine,
Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you liked it!
Christopher
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Re: My Chance
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by Goebelclm73 on
Monday, 16th June 2003 @ 08:36:30 PM AEST
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Shari,
I certainly agree with you! I have always had this problem though. I'm a bit shy in my older age, not like I was in my early 20's, gets harder as you get older I think, maybe it's just me. Thank you for the comment!
Christopher
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