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So many lost
Contributed by
wordsy
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Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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So many lost, uncounted cost
And more they die each day
Upon no list, do they exist
Or the price they had to pay
For the load they bared, no one cared
Not even that they were gone
Except the fact, on someone back
Their burdens now are on
And those that cry in sorrow
Again are all too few
Who seek again to barrow
The pain the others knew
To share their part in sadness
A world left in despair
And wrought with in our madness
Which is now beyond compare
And now were left to wander
And wonder at our fate
To leave behind, our begotten kind
Who dwell with in their hate
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2003-06-17 14:35:00]
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Re: So many lost
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by garyh on
Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 08:15:56 PM AEST
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ok... nice write, a little weird but nice..
i think that the 3rd line of the 2nd stanza should be "someones" if im correct? |
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