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Loneliness
Contributed by
Quivers
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Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 08:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The blood runs thick..
Like warm wine...
Everyone staring..
Will she really do it this time?
Is it bad enough...
Has she lost control?
She sits with the knife..
Her story untold.
No one knows who she is...
No one seems to care...
They only mock her and the knife...
She only sits and stares...
Numb and painless..
At least for now...
She's trying to forget..
But she knows not how...
Forget the pain and anger...
One slice at a time..
Motionless and distant...
She doesn't even cry...
With every drop..
There will be another scab...
With every slice...
Loneliness seems a little less sad....
Copyright ©
Quivers
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2003-06-17 20:35:00]
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Re: Loneliness
(User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 04:22:04 PM AEST
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this is so sad.. i know where you're coming from.. i like:
No one knows who she is...
No one seems to care...
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Re: Loneliness
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by Quivers on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 07:03:40 PM AEST
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| Thank you :) It is a sad poem...but it's meant to show ppl that they don't always know..... I appreciate you're taking the time to read...thanks for the comments :) |
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